Jocelyn C.
Per.2
June 3, 2011
Pit Bulls
I love all kinds of animals even though they can be ugly , fat, skinny, or deformed. I feel something very special for all of them. But the ones I can say get to me the most are dogs. Dogs are the most common animals to be abused. Especially when it comes to pit bulls. Pit bulls are the way they are for the same reason people make them that way.
Most of the owners just buy them for fighting. They train them to be mean and to fight and kill. I know for a fact that if they were treated and raised like any other normal dog they wouldn’t kill or hurt anybody around them. Instead mean people get them to make money off them not only for their fights they win but also for the babies they have. If it would be them and if it was their choice I know they would rather have a normal life and not have a sad and short life. The pit bull dog does not last a long time with a life of just fighting and killing. If they don’t kill it’s a big probability that they will be the ones getting killed.
People that do this to these animals have no heart and don’t care about them and just them self. They should think about things before doing them and give them the right to live and have a normal live.
I think your essay does a great job of appealing to emotion and showing how much you care for these dogs. However, you should always try and include facts from reliable sources when writing this type of persuasive essay. Learning about how many dogs are killed or abused might encourage the reader to also want to do something about the way pit bulls are treated.
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